One nice sunny Wendsday afternoon the whole school and I went out for cross country.
"Ready, set, GO!" Said Mrs. Timoko. Here I go speeding like a bullet. But once I started up the road, My legs were starting to get as slow as a turtle. Yahoo! I'm speeding as a bullet again! Down the hill I go! Through the goal post I go! Speeding up to Grayson! His legs are tired! Now's my chance! Oh no! Grayson's speeding up again! Barnicills! He tricked me! I was last in the BIG race.(I guess I didn't have enough practise at home!)
I felt exhausted.
The end.
By Daniel.
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What a gorgeous piece of writing Daniel,well done!
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